Throughout my life, I have always known that helping others would be an integral
part of my career. My parents raised me with the belief that we must constantly
strive to touch the lives of the people around us. In the second grade, I received
the first reward of my academic career: my teacher Mrs. Horodowich presented
me with the ?Most Likely to be a Peace Maker? award. In later years, whenever
I began wondering where my life was headed, my mother would remind me of that
award. She has never questioned her conviction that I will one day ?be a Peace
Maker? somewhere and somehow.
During high school and college, I searched for my identity. I looked at many
possible career paths, yet I always came back to law. It is the only profession
that perfectly matches my personality and goals, and gives me the ability to
fulfill my lifelong dream of making a significant impact on our society through
civil service. A vast majority of Florida and United States congressmen are
lawyers; the legal profession seems ideally suited to such a calling. I believe
that God has molded me into the type of individual who cares strongly about
his surroundings, and cannot be happy unless he is impacting those around him
in a positive way. This conviction is deeply rooted in my everyday routine and
in my overall life. I want to touch the lives of as many people as I can.
My burning desire to impact others has been with me throughout my life, but
became most firm during my sophomore year in high school. I began serving in
student government as the voice of my constituents. As time progressed, I grew
increasingly comfortable with stepping outside of the box. I realized that God
had given me a gift to speak, and that I could use that gift to benefit others.
In May of my sophomore year, I attended the Hugh O?Brien Youth Seminar, which
taught me how to think, not what to think. I quickly realized the impact I could
have in my everyday life. After that short weekend, my life changed drastically.
The leadership conference equipped me with new and unique tools that I could
apply throughout my life. I grew hungry for more of these tools and ideas, and
began to see law school as a place where I could acquire them.
Through high school and well into college, I continued finding myself. I participated
in numerous extracurricular activities, including presiding over the Greek and
American Student Association, joining the Hugh O'Brien Youth State Executive
Board, and coaching various volleyball teams in the Gainesville area, all while
holding down a full time job at the Home Depot and attending the University
of Florida. During the 2000 Jr. Olympic Volleyball National Championships in
Kentucky, I realized the fruits of my labor. Guiding the eleven fourteen-year-old
girls on my team to success brought me a great sense of accomplishment. Through
the year, sixteen hundred teams competed to enter this tournament, and only
sixty-four were invited. Although our team was from a small town with a population
of less then three hundred thousand, we somehow managed to finish ninth in the
nation. When the last ball hit the floor, I looked up and thanked God for giving
me such an honor. It was one of the greatest moments of my life, and taught
me a lesson that I will never forget. I realized that my ability to motivate
others could lead to great achievements. Law will definitely enable me to continue
finding such opportunities. At first, I may be helping one person at a time.
Yet as time passes and my aspirations become reality, I envision myself impacting
whole cities or states.
The XYZ has offered me an excellent education, and XYZ has given me great opportunities
to exercise my dreams. However, I believe that I would gain more from attending
a smaller, more personal institution. While visiting XYZ in Miami, I found the
small school atmosphere very exciting. I felt comfortable with the campus, and
had a feeling of welcome. Bob, the admissions counselor, gave me a tour of the
impressive facility. He made me feel at home, even though I had yet to apply.
I was most impressed with the openness of the faculty when Ken introduced me
to XYZ, who was very friendly and welcoming. I know that attending XYZ will
provide me with the educational foundation to fully realize my professional
and personal goals. I hope to make an important difference in society; XYZ will
provide me the opportunity.